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equestrias last hope: prism force I need some help with a fic!
Seraphim posted a topic in Crystal Empire Library
I'm not the best of writers and can't really say I've had success( an exception being Darkness Over Equestria), so I'm asking for help from any who could proofread a scene between Luna and Tainted MisOC of mine). I want to be able to show Tainted resentment for the sisters for being trapped in Tartarus for 100 years. People have left me hanging because they didn't have the patience to deal with my slow learning disability. I'm asking this because I'm struggling to find ways to really bring out tainted's character. Any who wish to help me, who have the patience to proofread, please post below and I'll write you a message privately.