TealMint_Moonrise

Equestria Girls FanFic in progress!

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Hey everypony!

 

I've just begun writing a FanFic that is themed around Equestria Girls, that tells a story that I've been dying to tell people!. I plan to submit this to EQD by October 7th, just to make sure y'all get some extra smiles for Pinkie Appreciation Day. The title of my story will be: “Through the Pone zone: The Seventh Element”

 

here's a quick sneak peek, which will be included in the story. I hope you all enjoy, and always remember, "you don't need wings to fly above the rest"

                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                       

Prologue

She had no other options. The only friends she’d had were in a place that she’d soon be traveling to. But their safety came at an unknown cost, and she wasn't willing to give up on them. Not yet, or ever.

 

It had been a successful week; finishing the collection, proudly decorating and observing what she called, “The Pone zone”. It didn’t come as a surprise to many of those she knew, that she enjoyed a “little” pony every once and awhile. It had now been a year since she had first begun her studies under the teachings of  her-majesties, Princess Celestia, and eventually Princess Twilight Sparkle.

 

It had proven hard, considering how many of her friends saw it as a hobby. But from the start, Caetlyn had known that this would be a second chance to finally prove to the others, especially the Mane Six, that she was as worthy a pony as any, to be the wielder of the nearly forgotten, but most important element of harmony, The Element of Purity.

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Ooh, I like what I've read so far! Very nice, indeed! :squee: I hope to see more of it in the future! ^_^

 

Good luck with the rest of your fanfic! :D

 

As a side note, I recommend posting all things fanfiction in the Crystal Empire Library sub-forum. I think it's best to put it with all the other fanfic-related content.

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Finally! :facedesk:*Exhausted/excited-ly slams hoof on table*:mlp_facehoof:

I've finally found a patch of my time were I was self motivated and inspired to once again begin working on my FanFic. A lot of my ideas have changed since then, but I still enjoy and value my original ideas around this idea, so I've spent hours reflecting on the best way to work with the current progress rather than totally re-write the story.

I used Much of the time not spent on this story, to do a bit of character development in myself rather, and I am trying my best to represent the best side of this fandom, and I often, in a usually unsuccessful attempt, fantasize about how I should go about designing the real pony I aspire to be. I think deeply while listening to "the pony I want to be".

I know through learning from our favorite pastel ponies, that finding a special talent is not a one-try-success, and it can take you by surprise when you do discover it. I am referring to the final part of designing an original character, the essential piece of anypony's representation,......

The Cutie Mark! I have many ideas but I can't exactly place my mind on which one to choose, and I have a feeling that there will be a moment, almost an epiphany, where I will discover "the magic inside", and that will be when I realize the perfect Cutie Mark that will represent me in no better way possible.

If anypony has any suggestions on how they've progressed from there beginnings, that would be very helpful!

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Nvm anything I've said before. I've entirely changed my focus, seeing how similar my previous story was to the majority of bad cliches I could think of. Still keeping the date set to Spooktober 7 tho, and I've also added in a whole bunch of new OCs. I finally realize how hard making OCs is, and that's just the original name half of it. The one thing I can confirm, is that it's the same core theme, but entirely different character cast, setting, dialogue and plot. I can also say that it will be worth the wait, and a total surprise, even to me probably. Other than that, I just thank other fic writers for a bit of inspiration. thx! :yay:

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Update 3:

 

I've made my final decision. I'm either going to work entirely on completing and perfecting this fanfic, or writing shorter stories, each with different themes based on different FiM characters.

I plan to read some fanfics before I get started just so that I know how to write a good story. I aim to finish by October 7, but if not, I see a window of opportunity between Applejack, and discord day October 20 - November 9

:eyebrow::confused:

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update 4:

This is something that has to be done. For the goods of Equestria!

I have concluded that this is a story I wish to pursue, and with 28 days left, I put forth my complete attention and focus.

I have also chosen to stick with the original story, but I've been "around the block" a couple of times, and I now know not to rely too heavily on my OCs.

 

p.s:

 

I've literally had 549 DAYS to work on this, (since my og post on March 9 2019) and all I've been doing is talking/hyping this up, and getting a plan for how I want to write it.

But have no worries everypony, because I am the lucky variety of pony, to succeed under pressure.

I'll be sure to keep y'all updated,... but until then,..

 

TealMint_Moonrise, - signing out until the great Fanfic debut

:awesomedash::celmmmmf::flutterdear::derpydance::dowant::lunadance::hurrr::proud::sweetieyes::twitwitch::yay:

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Update 5

 

With 23 days on the clock, I am separating my tasks into 8 parts:

 

character bio 1,

character bio 2,

character bio 3,

character bio 4,

character bio 5,

character bio 6,

 

Story concept ideas,

 

Rough draft/ (edited) Final Draft.

 

I plan spend two days on each, until I complete each piece, to finish the final.

I have also convinced myself (again) that it's ok to finish by October 20.

On 6/13/2020 at 8:43 AM, TealMint_Moonrise said:

I aim to finish by October 7, but if not, I see a window of opportunity between Applejack, and discord day October 20 - November 9

And like I said before;

On 4/19/2020 at 1:01 PM, TealMint_Moonrise said:

I can also say that it will be worth the wait, and a total surprise, even to me probably.

So, I look forward to a fic so amazing, that not even I, the author, can expect what will happen!

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5.

 

The sun has risen on "Day of Pink Pony", and the progress now looks dismal.

But don't worry, because I "cross my heart and hope to fly, stick a cupcake in my eye", that I will spend every second for the rest of my life, developing this story. Thanks for all you're support, and I have decided to no longer focus on the timing, and instead, focus on the story itself.:approve:

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6.

 

There has been a lot of time.:wait: Between now and when I began:lunaew:. But some things don't change:hithere:. I'm going to keep the core cast, especially the lead main character, expand on the supporting characters, and elaborate more on the plot and :flee:conflicts. I have been re-inspired:lunadance:, and I'm going to finish this story by the original date of October 7th, of 2022. It's time I set a specific date, and I will have something special by then, that I will proudly present here when the day arrives.:huzzah: :moonjuice:One thing must be said, to clarify the original intent of writing this: This story is my self-insert fic, told vicariously through an OC representation of my own image. I can promise this will not take away from the story; rather, it will reveal from the beginning my story of hardships:cry: and experiences that have shaped my life in the fandom, and how the franchise as whole has influenced my own morals and ideas. To conclude, this story will be a ponified autobiography of sorts, and in the end I will be proud of the Equestrianized life-story that I have written. :fiesta:The point is, I'm going to have fun with this! I'll take a causal but organized approach to this, and maybe someday, I too, will go to Equestria and share my stories there. and also meet new friends along the way!:monocle:

- TealMint_Moonrise_Marine

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