Sunset Stuck in Equestria Part 2

[Sunny Ray 471]

Zinnia Dawn entered Canterlot High. There was a girl with red and yellow hair waiting for her.  “Hi! I’m Sunset Shimmer!” She said. “You must be the new girl! What’s your name?” 

“Zinnia Dawn” grumbled Zinnia.

  “That’s a pretty name!” Replied Sunset Shimmer 

“I guess…” Zinnia mumbled

“BUT NOW IT’S TIME TO DESTROY YOU!!!” She cackled. A flash of red, and Sunset Shimmer was gone.

To be continued…

 

 

 

[TealMint_Moonrise 931]

Amazing story idea, I like how it's fast paced to include a sense of action, but easy to follow/understand! nice work!

[Sunny Ray 471]

Thanks!